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The October night was still young and now, at the park, the concert was now taking place. People rocking out everywhere, with drinks in hand, throwing their fists up in the air; it is a wonder if none of them started a mosh pit. The singers singing in the microphones and the strumming of guitars and the beating of the drums. Everyone was having a wonderful time. Benson was impressed of Skips and his plan and watched as the money poured in, literally.

Rigby would have attended, but he knew that Mordecai would be there, giving him death stares and having the look of him about to murder the raccoon. He decided to just stay in the house and play some video games, eat some snacks, and do whatever that would entertain him.

The raccoon sighed, "It sounds awesome out there..." At that moment, he thought to himself about how Mordecai and him would be rocking out to that concert. How they would be drinking cans and cans of soda and fist pumping in the air. He sighed one more time and continued to play his video game that was now getting old.

Meanwhile, at the concert, Mordecai jammed out to the tunes that were being played while people continued to drink their beverages, eat, and have a good time. The blue jay bobbed his head up and down with the beats of the drums, fist pumping with people every now and then. People were still arriving since the concert just recently started about 30 minutes ago. Mordecai looked at the people who were walking up to the masses who were close to the stage, sitting down, and applauding the performers.

"Wow, people actually came?" He thought to himself. "Wow, Benson must be loading up on the cash."

With the people arriving, someone was arriving that Mordecai didn't expect. It was Margaret with someone else; some guy. It took a couple of minutes before Mordecai had noticed the robin and her new date. When the blue avian turned around, his eyes widened and his already wounded heart shredded into more pieces. Margaret smiled at Mordecai, attempting to make him jealous and more heartbroken. Her new boyfriend kissed and hugged her tightly as the music played in the background, making it more "romantic" for them.

"What...?" Mordecai thought. In his seat, Mordecai slowly turned around, trying not to see what had just happened. He sat there and normally he would be fist pumping and having a good time, but Margaret and her new date ruined that for him. He sat there for minutes before getting up and going back inside the house.

:music:She's got a mission, and I'm collateral damage. (That's what she wanted)
She's the flower that you place on my casket. (That's what she wanted)
Savor the moment cause the memory's fleeting.
Take a photograph, as the last train is leaving.

Holli's looking dry looking for an easy target
Let her slit my throat give her ammo if she'll use it
Caution on the road lies lies and hidden danger.
Southern California's breeding mommy's little monster.
:music:


Rigby heard the sound of the front door opening, letting the sound of the concert enter the house and it briefly went away as the door slammed shut. He paused his game and heard footsteps. He turned around to see Mordecai walking up the stairs to his bedroom. Mordecai's face was completely sad looking. Rigby lowered his eyebrows and put on a frown; he went back to his game, trying not to empathize his ex-friend, but he couldn't help but think to help him.

:music:Better run run run run run (Holly let me out)
Better run run run run run (Holly let me out)
Better run run run run run (Holly let me out)
Better run run run run run run run (Holly let me out)
:music:

Mordecai closed the bedroom door behind him, trying to lock everyone out of his own world; a world that was slowly falling apart. He laid down on his bed, pulled the blankets over his cold body and cried.

"I'm not going back out there.... what for? I'm just going to see Margaret smile at me and hug and kiss on her new lover.... Why can't things go right for once around here? "
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I know, that was fucked up in Margaret, but don't dis her bros. D: She did it because she is trying to find the right guy and she still believes that Mordecai cheated on her.

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Lyrics:

:music:All her signals are getting lost in the ether (That’s what she wanted)
She's a landslide with a city beneath her (That’s what she wanted)
So take a good look, so you'll never forget it (That's what she wanted)
Take a deep breath, I know I'm gonna regret it (That's what she wanted)

Holli's looking dry looking for an easy target
Let her slit my throat give her ammo if she'll use it
Caution on the road lies lies and hidden danger.
Southern California's breeding mommy's little monster.

She's got a mission, and I'm collateral damage. (That's what she wanted)
She's the flower that you place on my casket. (That's what she wanted)
Savor the moment cause the memory's fleeting.
Take a photograph, as the last train is leaving.

Holli's looking dry looking for an easy target
Let her slit my throat give her ammo if she'll use it
Caution on the road lies lies and hidden danger.
Southern California's breeding mommy's little monster.

Better run run run run run (Holly let me out)
Better run run run run run (Holly let me out)
Better run run run run run (Holly let me out)
Better run run run run run run run (Holly let me out)
:music:


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~CrucifyTheWolf Jul 30, 2012  Student Writer
I want to bash Margret in the HEAD so badly.
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~Dalton709 Jul 30, 2012  Student Artist
Don't! She is just looking for the right guy, she still believes Rigby's little plan.
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~CrucifyTheWolf Jul 30, 2012  Student Writer
True o_o...But STILL >:C!!
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~Dalton709 Jul 30, 2012  Student Artist
And plus, if you think about it, she is actually pretty nice in the show. ._. I know that a lot of people in the fandom hate her, but she is nice. Just looking for the right guy.

Plus, I don't think that Margaret is the type of girl who will have One Night Stands with all of the guys around her.
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~CrucifyTheWolf Jul 30, 2012  Student Writer
True o_o.And also true.
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~Dalton709 Jul 30, 2012  Student Artist
Yeah. o_o;;
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~CrucifyTheWolf Jul 30, 2012  Student Writer
o_o.
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~phylos7 Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Margaret's a whore and a witch who doesn't believe her own boyfriend.
Mordecai is being the jerk he always has been. Confusing any feelings at all with being a "crybaby."
Rigby wasn't even thinkin clearly.

This is the most depressing fanfiction I have ever read. Do you need help writing it? It seems you need someone to show you how to make a happy storyline. I could help you!
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~Dalton709 Jul 30, 2012  Student Artist
Well, Margaret is actually nice in the show -- maybe not in this deviation -- but in the show, she is.

She is actually trying to find the right guy. She still believes Rigby's evil plan and is trying to move on.


Don't worry! I've got this, it will turn happy.
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~phylos7 Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Eh I'm done. It killed my sense of happy. I'm going to go watch Pen and Teller. Good luck with it : )
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